what do you think of this?

[ArtfulCodger]

They won't let it into gallery. Too grainy, I guess.
But that is part of the appeal to us.
Tawdry. Taken in a dark moment of passion.

[treo]

As a professional film maker and photographer. I have to say. There is nothing about these images that invoke any type of eroticism. We just cant see enough details. Ultra low contrast, saturation. I do understand that it gets you off, because you lived it. But.

Try to use some back lighting to create a silhouette of your figure. That way we can establish some form to the shot. I hope this helps.

[ArtfulCodger]

Originally Posted by treo

As a professional film maker and photographer. I have to say. There is nothing about these images that invoke any type of eroticism. We just cant see enough details. Ultra low contrast, saturation. I do understand that it gets you off, because you lived it. But.

Try to use some back lighting to create a silhouette of your figure. That way we can establish some form to the shot. I hope this helps.

Not what we wanted to hear, but at least constructive criticism. Thanks.

[ArtfulCodger]

in the heat of the moment on a cell phone. we weren't trying to set up a shot.
But thank you.

[sexfreak693]

Damn lovely tits. Looks like she's got a sexy body too. I'd love to see more

[bob_01]

Originally Posted by ArtfulCodger

They won't let it into gallery. Too grainy, I guess.
But that is part of the appeal to us.
Tawdry. Taken in a dark moment of passion.

I'd imagine they won't let them into the gallery because they appear as practically black.. from a far away observer they are black in the thumbnail. When I clicked on them they weren't bad though.. just turn the lights on next time :-P

[ArtfulCodger]

We're new to this and learning.
Appreciate the feedback and especially the touch ups!

[blackhat1]

I think that you have some beautiful big tits, and if you like the pics then fuck what anyone else says, some of our favorite pics were not the best but the memory is what made them special !!!